The Wee tales 11

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The infamous cricket match made the two villages stop, it was seen as a criteria to prove their dominance in front of all. This caused the competition to be fierce. Boys played and the girls cheered. Somehow, one teams player connected with the other teams cheer. Their heart joined though the villagers would see it as a terrible crime.Their bravery made them hold hands one day, unfortunately the elders caught them and they were dead the next day.

On the match day, the scoreboard said,
Honor-1
Humanity-0

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12 thoughts on “The Wee tales 11

    Himali Shah said:
    July 11, 2015 at 5:33 pm

    This is heart breaking as to how people fight in names of petty issues. Truly humanity looses ๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿ’”๐Ÿ’”

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      preetixd responded:
      July 11, 2015 at 5:55 pm

      Yeah, I was reading upon honor killing few days before and it wrenched my heart, looking at how petty issues can kills humanity just like that. I don’t get it at all.

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        Himali Shah said:
        July 11, 2015 at 6:52 pm

        Exactly. . I guess you must have seen the movie Ishakzade. Similar concept

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        preetixd responded:
        July 12, 2015 at 4:51 am

        Yes yes! I was kinda apprehensive to write about castes and religions so I tried use euphemism here via cricket matches, dominance etc.
        Controversial writing requires alot of courage ๐Ÿ˜›

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    Tejas Jani said:
    July 12, 2015 at 5:04 am

    This is so hard hitting in so few words. Brilliant.

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    Darshith Badiyani said:
    July 12, 2015 at 2:57 pm

    This is so touching. I was left speechless.

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    NJ said:
    July 13, 2015 at 8:56 am

    You have has captivated a truthful scenario so strongly ๐Ÿ™‚

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    shanx said:
    July 22, 2015 at 10:28 pm

    Powerful in a flash. Love flash fictions and a great job here Preeti!

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      preetixd responded:
      July 23, 2015 at 12:27 pm

      Thankyou so much shanx! ๐Ÿ™‚

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