The Wee tales 10

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She abstained herself from all the delicacies of life, getting a perfect figure had become her reluctant choice but then one day the right arrived.He accepted her with all her flaws making her realize that the one worth it will be beyond all of this.

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19 thoughts on “The Wee tales 10

    AdiC said:
    July 10, 2015 at 4:14 pm

    Lovely!! ❀

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    HumaAq said:
    July 10, 2015 at 4:20 pm

    True love!:-)

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    Gaurav Luthra said:
    July 10, 2015 at 4:25 pm

    Well put, it would be pretty boring if we all looked like that ‘perfect figure (if there is such thing)”. We all are different and we should accept that because that is what makes our lives interesting. I am not saying we should not make ourselves look better but never lose our inner self.

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      preetixd responded:
      July 11, 2015 at 9:47 am

      So true. We should all accept and love our uniqueness. πŸ™‚

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    gigoid said:
    July 10, 2015 at 5:31 pm

    Preeti….

    Was the lack of capitalization & anomalous punctuation deliberate? If so, what was the purpose? I found the content of the story to be interesting and apt, but found the lack of structure to be a distraction. I think correctly capitalizing and punctuating it would make it much more powerful….

    A nice effort though; the core idea, to encourage women to stop trying to live up to unrealistic societal fantasies, is an excellent subject for today’s world….

    Hope I’m not out of place; I try to be constructive on the few occasions I offer editorial suggestions. I AM a native English speaker, for almost 65 years, and have been a grammar & spelling nazi since my youth… I understand the concept of artistic choice & expression, so I know words, especially when there are so few, don’t HAVE to be correctly put together, if the author is creating a certain effect by that…. But, if not, it makes it seem unprofessional, or lacking expertise in English, a very complex, and complicated language, to be sure…

    Keep up the good work…. these short little tales are excellent practice in using and increasing both vocabulary, and the learning/finding/creating your own style…. I’ll say this; I speak a couple other languages, (Spanish, German, Sign, a little Japanese…) but, cannot write in any of them, but for English, beyond the simplest of ways, to obtain basic services… I am very impressed with your use of your second language….

    humbly yours,

    gigoid, the dubious

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      preetixd responded:
      July 11, 2015 at 9:50 am

      Thank you Gigoid for your feedback. I will surely try to be more grammar conscious from now. πŸ™‚

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    Tejas Jani said:
    July 11, 2015 at 7:28 am

    Oh lovely. Being able to see beyond physicality is a bliss. πŸ™‚

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    Himali Shah said:
    July 11, 2015 at 5:19 pm

    Awwee. . This is so so perfect.. I wish we all get someone who accepts all our flaws πŸ˜‡

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    Darshith Badiyani said:
    July 12, 2015 at 3:04 pm

    Beautiful πŸ™‚

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    Prateek Kohli said:
    September 19, 2015 at 6:39 pm

    It is perfect πŸ˜ƒ
    Did you by any chance watched the series, ‘boy meets world’? I quote the protagonist here, “this can only be said by someone beautiful. Because he/she doesn’t know what being ugly means.”
    I know we’ll have an argument now, and I don’t know why, but I am looking forward to it😁

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      preetixd responded:
      September 19, 2015 at 7:36 pm

      Thankyou Prateek and Nope, never even heard of it but the quote stated by the protagonist made me get into some deep thought.
      Have you observed that there are these super pretty people who have features similar to the main characters of cliche novels but then, still they lack something while there are these perfectly average people who look extra ordinarily beautiful?

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        Prateek Kohli said:
        September 20, 2015 at 2:24 am

        You made your point. Yes I agree πŸ˜ƒ
        I learn so much from youπŸ˜‰

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        preetixd responded:
        September 20, 2015 at 3:57 am

        I learn from you too πŸ™‚

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